Olive Oil and Wine
Olive Oil and Wine (Current Version) A final bar of light dims over the meal; the olive oil and wine glimmer on the tray, wisps of conversation fall back, die away. A woman's long skirt slowly...
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Hi Bernie-There seems to be an understanding wanting to break out from the obscurity here.I'm trying to get there.Will attempt again.Peace,Yoly
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Well, I get to watch Chinese fireworks from my back porch sometimes, like Bobby Brady. Not bad, bernie. Not bad.Kind regards,Smikes
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Olive Oil and Wine (Current Version) A final bar of light dims over the meal, the olive oil and wine glimmer on the tray, wisps of conversation fall back, die away. A woman's long skirt slowly...
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Okay. This like much better!I see what I missed before.Good good goodYoly
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I'm trying so hardto get this one. I will keep reading. Sometimes, I amdriving, or doingsomething else, and a poem pushesits way into mysoul, then it clicks.The title is reallycatchy~!quixotik
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Ah, a cross-posting! My favourite bit is the first stanza... Bernie I have put the same note on Salty Dreams...I liked this and can't find anything to gripe about!Tonight, I seem drawn to poems set on...
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Hi BernieI liked the mood and ambience this poem conveys. The details and the landscape are beautifully combined to create impact. one feels how the evening meal envelops the participants and how time...
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I finally got it!YIPPPEE!!!The title ismisspelled, though!Hmmm...interesting poem.Dark...the paintedeye! That's whatgave it away!YIPPPEE!!! quix
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Nice - the voice is outstanding in this one. Esp liked, 'for one still hour this beach and island disappear from all known ocean maps. ' The title- simple, inviting readers to tap into this. Thanks...
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I remeber the title, and went back to this. Definitly think the revision is stronger.
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